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Evil Comes Part 3

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This is a very long comic. I'd split it, but it would break off during the big moment ;n; I'm sorry
Also, there's going to be a lot of text, so I'm going get the important stuff over with becausenobodyreadsanymore

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*As Riyumi eyes opened, she found herself in the hands of her boyfriend, who was cry his heart out, tears rolling down his face as he continued to sob that he was sorry. She held him to her and patted his back, and as she does memories came back to her, especially the first one. The first one of them. The first time they ever met.*

*On that day, she was strolling through the woods, smiling and skipping about in peace. At one point though, the elf girl had heard a scream and turned her head towards where the sound came from. She went forward and peeked from behind a tree. What she saw froze her in horror: A little bunny, up against a tree with a towering figure in front of it, its face twisted in a demonic smile. Riyumi had heard of this.... thing, this creature that had became the terror of the forest. As she looked in horror and anger at the attacker, she felt a great evil surrounding its very being. But.... there was something wrong. Not the scene that was happening in front of her, but of the creature itself. This cruelty and darkness that was surrounding it. It wasn't right. Princess Riyumi could sense a little spark inside the boy, one that was smothered by blackness.

*The elf then stepped out from behind the tree and confronted the boy. She was taking a great risk, one that might get her serious hurt or worse... but she had to know. Somehow though, the boy was scared by Riyumi's determination and anger. As it backed away from her up against the tree behind it, Riyumi walked forward. That spark inside the boy flickered, it had reacted to the fear. Then, as the boy in rags and swirling darkness cowered in front of her, she fell onto her knees and embraced him. He did not move back, he did not try to resist, he just became still. The princess then spoke words of comfort to him and seconds later, the boy began to sob uncontrollably into her shoulder. As he did though, the elf felt the darkness disappear around him and held him close.*

*It was over half-an-hour before he had stopped sobbing and sniffed. Riyumi released him from her embrace, but kept her hands on his shoulders, smiling.* Come on now *The elf took his hands in hers and sat up, pulling the boy in rags shakily to his feet.* Let's go *Princess Riyumi, holding the boys right hand, began to pull him towards her kingdom, her home, but just as she does, she stops.* Oh, I forgot to tell you *She giggled and turned her head to face him, smiling a beautiful smile.* My name is Princess Riyumi. What's yours?

*The boy started and looked down at the ground, blushing and wiping his eyes with a dirty fist. It had been years since he had really talked with anyone, he had been alone for so long. He felt almost as if he had lost the power of speech. There was silent for a while as they held hands and girl smiling kindly back at him. Then the boy spoke, in a staggered whisper.* K-K-K-...K-Kenny....

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And that is how my OCs, Kenny and Riyumi, first met.

Shocking right? I bet you didn't think it would have been like this. Well it did.

You see, after the horrible thing that Kenny did that made him flee his village, he had crawled into a cave and became depressed. He blamed himself for what had happened, even though he didn't mean to do it. The curse though fed off his despair and sadness and became to take over his mind. It filled him with dark thoughts, ones of evil, cruelty, and anger. He soon was known all over the woods as "The Monster", a creature of great cruelty, with a dark hand and eye and razor sharp teeth. He did terrible things under the curse's influence, including beating up defenseless creatures, even little bunnies. He'd beat them to death sometimes. If Riyumi hadn't recognized his actions where not really his own, he would have become something more... a great evil, maybe even one that with enough power to try and rule the land.



So yeah, after weeks of staring at a screen, tablet pen smoking, and delays from college finals, family incidents, and laziness/ love of video games, the curse comic is all over :iconnoodleslovesitplz: AndnowI'mgoingtobeburriedinallthedrawingsIneedtodobutcouldn'tbecauseIsworeI'dfinishthisbeforedoinganythingelse;u;

I'll be putting a to-do list up soon*drowns in flood of ideas*


I hope you have enjoyed it and that the wait was worth it Q u Q *hugs you all* I'm really, really, really, REALLY sorry this took so long.


Ohyeah,andhoweverdidthistoRiyumiisSOOOOOOOOOOdead
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Then that same evil hung her from a tree?